Editorial Services

I’m your partner in leveling up your manuscript.

My job as an editor is to strengthen your vision for your story. My expertise is in genre fiction, particularly fantasy, sci-fi, and horror. I particularly enjoy helping writers meet some expectations while subverting others, analyzing story structure, deepening worldbuilding, and enhancing characterization.

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Manuscript Critique

$0.02 (CAD) per word

An evaluation that details your novel’s biggest strengths and weaknesses, including actionable advice on how to tackle revisions. 

What You Get: An editorial letter

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Line Edit

$0.03 – $0.035 (CAD) per word

An evaluation of your novel at a sentence level. I will look for areas like writing in a passive voice, effective use of adverbs and adjectives, repetition, unclear phrasing, emotional resonance, errors of continuity, info-dumping, and wordiness. 

What You Get: In-line suggestions

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Developmental Edit

$0.032 (CAD) per word

An in-depth evaluation of plot, structure, tone, point(s) of view, worldbuilding, pacing, dialogue, consistency, and character arcs. 

What You Get: An editorial letter + comments in the margins

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Other Critiques

For polishing materials before you query or self-publish.

  • Query letter: $70

  • First 10 pages (~2,500 words): $70

  • First 20 pages (~5K words): $130

  • Synopsis (500–700 words): $90 

  • Back cover blurb & author bio: $100

What You Get: Comments in the margins + in-line suggestions

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“Allison's knowledge of story structure and her keen sense of pacing helped me break my struggling manuscript down to its bones and rebuild it into the best possible version of itself. Her insight, encouragement, and excitement provided a much-needed boost to get my novel polished and ready for readers. I couldn't be prouder of the result.”

— SHELLY CAMPBELL, author of The Marked Son series

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